Fall, Friends, and Final Revisions

Hi, friends!

It’s finally fall, my favorite season of all, and boy, have I been busy! Sweater weather is just around the corner, and I can’t wait. Between getting everything ready for the release of Date Night With Death and trying to stay on top of things at my day job, I feel like I’ve barely had time to breathe. I did take an extended Labor Day weekend, though, and it was great to visit friends I hadn’t seen in years. I even gave myself a full week off from writing and plotting, which was exactly what I needed.

Date Night With Death comes out in just over a week, and I’m so grateful to the early readers who’ve already reached out to tell me how much they’ve enjoyed it. While not always easy to hear, I also appreciate the ones who wrote to say they hated it or DNFed because it wasn’t what they were expecting. If you haven’t read it yet, the vibe is definitely different from Once Upon a Blue Moon. It is a little darker, which honestly feels closer to my natural lane. I love cozy, but sometimes I just need to let the shadows in. Honestly, I like Date Night better than Blue Moon, but what can you do? 🙂

On the writing front, I’m about halfway through revising the first half of book three. While cleaning it up, I realized that what I had mapped out as book five actually needs to come earlier in the series arc, so I’m swapping books four and five. I’ve taken a break from cleaning up book three so I can reorganize notes and plots, so I don’t lose track of why I made the change in the first place. Speaking of tone, book three is shaping up to be a mix of the first two. There are many more lighter moments reminiscent of Blue Moon, but we are still very much in the thick of the Concord’s growing menace. The deeper we dig into them, the more evil comes to the surface.

Thank you for sticking with me. A handful of you have sent in great questions, and I’ll be putting together a Q&A post soon to answer them. I’m also hoping to have a new Moonridge Gazette article up in the near future. They take a little more time to put together, but they’re some of my favorite posts to share.

Until next time.

Avery

Review Copies Available

Hello, friends!

Just a quick note to let you all know that electronic review copies of Date Night With Death are now on StoryOrigin and NetGalley. You can apply for a review copy here:

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NetGalley Reviewer

I’m in the process of getting everything together to get the book up on NetGalley. I work with BookBuzz on this and it usually takes them a bit. I’m hoping it will be up and ready to request by the end of next week. I will update this post and add the link once it’s available.

OK, off to Moonridge. I’m rewriting some new scenes for book three and… dang! Things are getting messy!

Lots of love,

Avery

Death is Coming

OK. I couldn’t wait any longer. I spent all last week and this past weekend finalizing “Date Night With Death”. It’s done. I can’t edit it down any further. I feel like the voices are strong, the story is tight, and the stakes have been raised. It’s time to wrap this one up so I can get back to writing book three.

This book was originally slated for release on October 7, but since I’m my own publisher and it’s essentially ready, I’ve moved the publication date up two weeks to September 23. It’s available now for Kindle pre-order, and paperback pre-orders will be up as soon as I’ve confirmed that the printed proof looks great.

I’m still planning to have ARCs available (electronic only) at the end of this month. Keep an eye on the blog and be sure to sign up for the newsletter so you can be the first to know when they are available.

As I’ve mentioned before, this book is darker than Blue Moon. There are still moments of levity, but there is also death in the mix, which is inevitable when the Grim Reaper is part of the story. Just a heads up that it contains references to:

  • Cancer (specifically a brain tumor)
  • Attempted suicide
  • Death and grief
  • Mentions of domestic abuse
  • Mentions of abortion
  • Mentions of infidelity

The cancer storyline is deeply personal. My aunt lived with the same diagnosis featured in this book, and many aspects of the character’s journey were inspired by what she experienced. Writing those scenes was emotional for me. Reading them might be emotional for you, too.

That said, I can’t wait for you to meet Dex and dive into his and Mina’s story. And without further ado, here’s the final cover art.

Did Someone Order a Facelift?

Yes, I know “Once Upon a Blue Moon” just released. It’s basically still a newborn. So why would I decide to change the cover already? Let me tell you a little story…

Actually, there’s no big story. The truth is, my friend created digital versions of my characters for me with the original plan of using them on the covers. But when it came time to actually design those covers, I started wanting tweaks. A lot of tweaks. And they weren’t quick fixes either. (Read: I was a pain in the butt.) Who knew that it would be so time consuming?

The sweet part? He never told me no. Instead, he came up with a completely different design that was easier on his time and energy and allows him to combine licensed art with his own. He showed me a concept and I loved it (with very few tweaks). So we scrapped the character-based covers and went with something simpler, cuter, and more in line with what’s trending in the genre right now.

I especially fell in love with the cover for Date Night With Death. I can’t wait for you to see it in a couple of weeks! And don’t worry, I’ll still be using the individual characters on the website.

But first things first.

Here’s the brand-new cover for Once Upon a Blue Moon! The Kindle version is already updated. I’m just waiting on the physical proof of the paperback to make sure everything looks right when printed. As soon as it gets the thumbs up, that will be updated too.

Hope you love it as much as I do!

The Real Magic Behind the World of Moonridge

Today, I want to focus on where the idea for the town and the characters featured in the Welcome to Moonridge series came from.

I grew up in a small town that, to me, always felt a little magical. Sure, it had its flaws (what small town doesn’t?), but there was something about it that I loved. I felt like I was in my own little world where anything could happen. I wanted to recreate that and incorporate all the “what ifs” that I could.

As a kid, I was very “unconventional.” Ok, I’ll admit it. I was a weirdo. I was the one dreaming of casting spells, pretending I had secret powers, and desperately hoping to wake up one morning and discover I was a real witch. Spoiler alert: it didn’t happen the way I wanted it to. It was a sad day when I finally realized there was no way I could shoot magic beams out of my hands, or turn someone into a toad. Yes, I was bullied for being different, but what helped me get through this was a small but mighty group of eclectic, diverse, unapologetically weird and loyal friends who embraced each other’s quirks. We were the outcasts, and we stuck together. This continued into college where I really met my people. Many of us are still incredibly close today, and some of them even gave me permission to turn them into characters in this series.

When I started building Moonridge, I knew exactly the kind of town I wanted it to be. Small and cozy, sure, but also open-minded and tight-knit. An inclusive place where my diverse group of friends and I could exist peacefully. A place where your differences aren’t simply tolerated, they’re celebrated and everyone is welcome. I wanted it to be a place where people don’t always get along, but at the end of the day, they take care of each other. I needed that. I think we all do these days. The world feels really heavy and gross and almost too much to deal with at times. Between all the division, the transphobia, homophobia, racism, misogyny, the wars—including what’s happening in Palestine—it’s a lot. So I made Moonridge my escape. A town with a big heart, where people (and supernatural beings) rally together to fight the darkness. A place I wish existed in real life.

Now, let’s talk characters, because this is where things get really personal.

Hazel, our stubborn, spell-slinging witch? She’s me. Or at least, a version of me that I wish I could show all the time. I’m painfully shy, but once I feel safe, I open up. Hazel doesn’t have that shy filter. She’s brave in ways I wish I could be. She says the things I only think. She stands up, speaks out, and doesn’t apologize for her power. Writing her has been healing in ways I didn’t expect. Maybe one day I’ll be more like her.

And Blake? Big, broody, soft-on-the-inside Blake? That’s my partner, through and through. He’s a very tall, very bearded, gruff teddy bear of a man. The body swap idea came straight out of a late-night COVID conversation. I asked him what it would be like if we were to swap bodies for a day. What would feel weird? What would he do as me? What would I do as him? The answers were, shall we say, enlightening. And hilarious. And that’s where the first spark of Once Upon a Blue Moon was lit.

La’Tasha, Hazel’s no-nonsense bestie? 100% inspired by one of my real-life best friends. She’s the strongest, most beautiful person I know. She’s a soul mate, a therapist, a walking search engine, and one of my fiercest cheerleaders. I love her deeply, and Hazel deserved to have someone like her by her side. That unconditional, ride-or-die type of friendship is a kind of magic all its own. It was just as easy for me to develop La’Tasha as it was Hazel and Blake. There was no way there could be a Hazel without her.

Calvin is based on another close friend. What’s been especially fun is that both of these dear friends have been deeply involved in developing their fictional counterparts. We brainstorm together and map out character arcs. It’s collaborative storytelling at its absolute best. I can’t wait for you to see what we’ve come up with for their books. (Oh yes, La’Tasha and Calvin will both find love amidst the dangers of Moonridge in coming installments.)

And then there’s Coco, who’s loosely inspired by a goddaughter, and Leo, the lovable disaster of the group, is very much based on my bestie’s brother. Every time Leo stumbles his way into a magical mess, just know … yeah, there’s some truth to it.

So when I say Moonridge is personal, I mean it. These stories are magical and fictional, but also stitched together from real relationships, conversations and daydreams. This town and these characters are my heart on a page.

Thanks for letting me share them with you.

And that’s a wrap!

I know, I know—I’m behind on blog posts. This one was meant to go up Friday, and here we are on Sunday. But I promise, I’ve got a good excuse: I just finished line edits for Date Night With Death! The manuscript is officially off to my amazing proofreaders for the final round.

If you’ve been following along, you know I wrote the first two Welcome to Moonridge books back to back. After polishing up Blue Moon and getting it out into the world, I returned to Date Night for another read-through to reorient myself, and that’s when something unexpected happened. I had a breakthrough!

While working through a chapter that felt like it was missing something, the missing piece of a future plot thread clicked into place. I’ve already outlined books three, four, and part of five, but there was a lingering issue I hadn’t quite figured out. It had been gnawing at me in the background, but a little voice kept saying, “Leave it. It’ll make sense later.” And it finally did. The writing gods and goddesses are so weird!

Once I saw how to fix it, I got excited. Like, really excited. I ended up expanding a minor side character’s role. She’s now a major player, not just in Date Night, but in the books to come. That shift meant cutting three chapters and writing four new ones, but I can honestly say the book (and the series) is going to be stronger for it.

Here’s what’s next:

  • I expect to get proof edits back by mid-August.
  • After that, I will dive into typesetting the paperback.
  • The cover is pretty much good to go, but I’m going to sit on it for a while. I’m planning to reveal it on Friday, August 15th.
  • In the coming weeks, I’ll also be sharing new character bios, including the fabulous Real Vampire Wives of Obsidian Hills.
  • We’re still working on the contact form for the site. Hopefully, it won’t be much longer.

If you’re a reviewer, ebook advance copies will be available on StoryOrigin and NetGalley around the beginning of September.

There’s still a lot to do, and even more to share. Stay tuned!